OH MY GOD THINK.
You are so intelligent, so WHY HASN'T WHATEVER SCHOOL SYSTEM YOU ATTENDED TAUGHT YOU HOW TO WRITE IN A READABLE MANNER???
I made some quick revisions to your post so that people can ACTUALLY READ IT and UNDERSTAND IT.
PS A DASH is "--" with NO SPACE between the neighboring words. A "-" is a HYPHEN and is NEVER USED TO CONJOIN PHRASES. It is used in COMPOUND WORDS or to CONTINUE A WORD ON THE NEXT LINE.
PPS STOP BREAKING UP--like this, for instance, where you have to plod through an entirely different--even if related--idea while suspending the broken up clause where halfway through the clause enclosed in dashes the reader has already forgotten the beginning of the embedding clause--CLAUSES WITH OVERLY LONG DASHED PHRASES.
PPPS LRN2PARAGRAPHFFS
I've heard that Britain has done more to murder the English language than America could ever hope to do, and frankly Think's posts often confirm this in my head
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