thanks for the comments guys

the part with the vocals could use something, I agree, but I couldn't figure out what. I considered having a snare drum come in halfway through and finishing up with the song (like a march), but like usual I got a bit lazy. When I tried adding guitar to it made me want to change the vocals completely, and honestly I like the way the song sounds with the vocals now.

we'll see what happens, I always say I'll change things and add new parts but I never get around to it, maybe I'll actually do it this time.

also www.myspace.com/jaredmwilliams more tracks there if anyone is interested thanks