http://www.box.net/shared/xz6tff4hk9
let me know what you think, thanks!
http://www.box.net/shared/xz6tff4hk9
let me know what you think, thanks!
anything?
A bit too minimalistic for my tastes. I'd add more guitar, but not enough to distract from the vocals. The solo at the end was great.
The fiery red Torino rolled to the curb, we hit the pavement ready for action.
It did seem very minimalistic. I liked the progression a lot though, but maybe adding a melody to some of the earlier parts or maybe some light percussion could add a new dimension to the song. The vocals were bomb, definitely fit the mood of the track.
Honestly, I really liked it. It sounded a bit like the early stages of an Animal Collective song.
thanks for the comments guys
the part with the vocals could use something, I agree, but I couldn't figure out what. I considered having a snare drum come in halfway through and finishing up with the song (like a march), but like usual I got a bit lazy. When I tried adding guitar to it made me want to change the vocals completely, and honestly I like the way the song sounds with the vocals now.
we'll see what happens, I always say I'll change things and add new parts but I never get around to it, maybe I'll actually do it this time.
also www.myspace.com/jaredmwilliams more tracks there if anyone is interested thanks
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