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    Default short track

    Any comments/suggestions appreciated. Thanks!

    http://www.box.net/shared/syyqavlout

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    not even sympathy?

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    Quite good; a very relaxing track.
    The fiery red Torino rolled to the curb, we hit the pavement ready for action.

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    thanks for the comment, much appreciated.

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