this is really interesting from a theoretical point of view on the subject of speed.

Perhaps a little more elaboration of the lines like "speed and age" and "speed not age" would add another level to the piece specifically targeted at theorising speed, in the same vein as Milan Kundera's Slowness or The Founding and Manifesto of the Futurists, but without this it is nonetheless a very evocative and capturing piece.

The sentance structure at times felt predictable, but still managed to capture my interest. Very good, but i feel like theres something you still have more to give.