I sang the hook and played the guitar. Feedback welcomed.
I sang the hook and played the guitar. Feedback welcomed.
If this is for realsies, that is pretty good
Join Date: Jul 2009
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I don't like this kind of music, but I could totally it being on one of the radio stations I skip over while trying to find baseball scores.
Oh looky, another emo-indie song. How novel.
The beginning was good; I liked the guitar lick. Then it started going downhill with the white rapper (read: rapping like a white, not a white who raps, though I'm sure he's both) who sounded like he had a mouth full of molasses, and then hit rock bottom when the entirely forgettable, trite, and hackneyed formulaic chorus-effect refrain came in. I mean as soon as you heard the first word of it, who here did not the title of the song to soon follow? Also why are you saying "yenemy" instead of "enemy"? I mean the worst part of the chorus was that the lyrics in it sucked. It's not hard to remember something when you say it to their face. It takes one to know one is a schoolyard taunt, and then you stare at the sun for some reason??
But the only way to get better is to keep trying, so keep at it ^_^
Reminds me of Linkin Park.
I don't disagree about baseball, but who the hell flips stations on the radio to find football scores?
This sounds like something that a radio station would play. So, yes, it could be a hit.
Appreciate the comments. Thanks.
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