http://www.box.net/shared/xz6tff4hk9
let me know what you think, thanks!
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http://www.box.net/shared/xz6tff4hk9
let me know what you think, thanks!
anything?
A bit too minimalistic for my tastes. I'd add more guitar, but not enough to distract from the vocals. The solo at the end was great.
It did seem very minimalistic. I liked the progression a lot though, but maybe adding a melody to some of the earlier parts or maybe some light percussion could add a new dimension to the song. The vocals were bomb, definitely fit the mood of the track.
Honestly, I really liked it. It sounded a bit like the early stages of an Animal Collective song.
thanks for the comments guys
the part with the vocals could use something, I agree, but I couldn't figure out what. I considered having a snare drum come in halfway through and finishing up with the song (like a march), but like usual I got a bit lazy. When I tried adding guitar to it made me want to change the vocals completely, and honestly I like the way the song sounds with the vocals now.
we'll see what happens, I always say I'll change things and add new parts but I never get around to it, maybe I'll actually do it this time.
also www.myspace.com/jaredmwilliams more tracks there if anyone is interested thanks :)