...for a couple minutes. Serious critiques only, please.
There once was a an internette named Kati Choi
Who searched the internet for a boy toy
She pulled down his pants
And went into a trance
Because it was a lesbo with a detachable dong.
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...for a couple minutes. Serious critiques only, please.
There once was a an internette named Kati Choi
Who searched the internet for a boy toy
She pulled down his pants
And went into a trance
Because it was a lesbo with a detachable dong.
Should be 'because it was a lesbo'.
The rhythm doesn't really flow like a proper limerick should though. And the last line doesn't rhyme.
Okay. Got that fixed. It doesn't flow like a proper limerick because I wanted to do something different. I call it an emo limerick.
I like it. You should try and get it published.
Sir Bifford, I dub thee comedy clutch of the internet.