Last thing I wrote called "Lonely Whores"

Let me make a word, a comment, a face, a bruise.
Let me take a breath, a moment, a love, a life.
What's the difference between this and being all alone?
Alone's the only feeling I've ever felt.
In a crowd with feelings galore,
In a bar with all those whores,
In a club with those stranger best friends,
In a house with my life,
My wife.
Alone's the only way I've ever been.
Ostracized and capsized for every thought,
For every feeling,
Made to be the devil for anything.
Take those halos down,
Tear them from your eyes.

Not every action,
Has underlying meaning,
Nothing starts with unwarranted hate.

Not everything you read into,
Starts with you.


Tell me what ya think

I think its about anger for not getting the attention that is not wanted.

Brilliant.

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Originally Posted by Mad Pino Rage

I think its about anger for not getting the attention that is not wanted.

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Kinda more about someone taking everything I ever wrote to heart, and instantly assumed it was about here or someshit, w/o cause or anything.

and "Attention that is not wanted?" think that means what I just explained :P but yea said relationship left me pretty much dying to be ignored.


Lols emo.

It is so touching it made me cry. I love poems about whores.

Edit: Nicely done.

Moar please.

Moar please. (poems about whores)

Very impressive, reading it allowed me to go of on a few mental tangents, i love poetry like that, that provokes the reader into contemplation. My compliments.

Come one and all to "The Crowd"; we have feelings galore nightly!