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    My mind aches with every thought
    Conclusions of self are often distraught
    Pushing through the veil of folded memories
    Eyes perceive what I cannot believe

    Tempests rage and the rains fall
    These things do nothing to my mind
    All the thoughts, and all that will be appalled
    Sanity in this maelstrom you will not find



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    Poisoning my mind to soothe my heart
    Maddening liquor bullets tearing emotions
    Life’s trivial notions, and seagulls over oceans
    The thoughts in my mind that will not part

    Longing for more than what land can fulfill
    Sweet sunsets over water not a rolling hill
    Too long my feet have laid dormant
    Long have I awaited this single moment

    Climb aboard the ship and sail into the dawn
    Land will vanish, behind the distance
    Leave behind sun bleached fields full of fawn
    To see the world reborn, and life anew

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    If you're going to post your terrible poetry, do it here so that nobody else has to look at it.
    thank you for using this forum as intended.

    i have some untitled words for you too:

    trite

    self-indulgent

    meaningless

    tripe


    (although the first stanza of the second ahem *poem* has some merit)
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    Quote Originally Posted by sycld View Post
    thank you for using this forum as intended.

    i have some untitled words for you too:

    trite

    self-indulgent

    meaningless

    tripe

    (although the first stanza of the second ahem *poem* has some merit)
    Tripe or trite? Unless of course the poem is the part of a cow's stomach.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheOriginalGrumpySpy View Post
    Tripe or trite? Unless of course the poem is the part of a cow's stomach.
    it is trite tripe, dear.

    "trite" is the adjective describing what type of "tripe" it is.

    and yes, it is obviously a part of the cow's digestive tract, as i said it is "tripe," did i not?


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