A sad poem, kinda, but the subject, you, came out on top. I think it's well done for getting out your message and letting the reader know something about you.

Do you like to write a lot of poetry? I use to, but I haven't in a while because I just like to write poetry in all sorts of free verse. I think when I do that I'm not a very good poet, so I kinda started studying poetry in my free time so I can make my poetry seem much more spectacular.