Thank you simonj, its nice to see constructive criticism as opposed to the likes of coqauvin's un-called for hostility towards everything i write. I would'nt say the rest of it is drivel, but nor am i going to explain each line in turn, that would be amazingly pointless. As for studying poetry, i have (albeit not in any great depth) but i genuinly find it relaxing and entertaining to write poetry. One doesnt need to be outstanding at an artform to persue it, as the dear golden oldie goes, practice makes perfect.
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