Quote Originally Posted by MalReynolds View Post
Like your story, hate the ending. Haaaatttteee the ending.
This, except the story is kind of cliched and uninteresting. And disgusting. Why would anyone read it? It seems like getting into a story like this would just reveal weird and twisted sexual issues on the part of the reader.

EDIT: didn't see this

Quote Originally Posted by sycld View Post
stereotypical story with indications of some weird sexual issues on the author's part