Quote Originally Posted by coqauvin View Post
Even if that were the case, I don't understand the purpose of the satire. Most satire exists to poke fun of something, but in order for that to work, you have to identify what you are mocking, then compare it and laugh at the juxtaposition.

Here, all you did was faithfully reproduce the spirit of those you were mocking, but without doing anything worthy of attention - there was no comparison made, no hints of something that could be improved, but wasn't. There was nothing except that which you were trying to insult, the end result being that it became what you were trying to satire

I'm pretty sure everyone has said this but you're not a troll, and you're still bad at it
it's not done, not even close. I'll be editing in the rest pretty soon.
its not so much a story as it is a rant of how everything in life is taken from an Emo's perspective.

I never was any good at writing serious things.